Revision Activity for Legislative Article

Yesterday, we worked together on peer-editing the legislation article. You should have been provided with a peer review that did the following:

1. In a couple of sentences, summarize what info. was well-developed and which ideas need additional support
2. In a couple of sentences, identify places where the organization or LTQT format of the writing is weak, and provide suggestions
3. Provide THREE questions or suggestions for extending and developing the discussion in the article

Today, you need to revise and supplement your coverage of the article. As you write, highlight your changes, and let me know which corrections are the result of feedback you got from the person who peer edited your paper. 

NOTE: You need to address at least one of the suggestions/ questions your partner provided in part three of the peer edit. One of the most important parts of news writing is to anticipate the questions, concerns, or implications raised by the news discussion and provide this coverage to the reader.