Thursday, February 11, 2016

Fundraising Letter

Rate Sheet

Potential Advertisers

Student-Relevant Interests
Blazin Bagels     HAILEY
Black Bear Froyo     HAILEY
911 Driving School     HAILEY
Red Wagon     EDDIE
Mecconis      KYLE
Planned Parenthood
Jamba Juice     KATE
Emerald City Smoothie     KOLLEE
Pita Pit     ALICIA
McDonalds     KYLE
Brewery City Pizza     KATE
Dairy Queen     KATE
Eagan's     ATLANTA
Panera Bread
Applebees     ATLANTA
Menchies     ALEX
ColdStone     KOLLEE
Papa John's     HAILEY
Baskin Robbins     TYRA
Darby's
Popinjay
Archibald Sisters     TYRA
Compass Rose     TYRA
South Sound Running     KYLE
Avenue Espresso     TRISTAN
Inferno's
Fred Meyer Jewlers     ALICIA
Papa Murphy's     ALICIA
Little Caesar
Tumwater Lanes     SAMMI
Airport Golf and Batting Center
PlayLive Gaming Lounge
Subway
Arby's
Taco Del Mar
Wembly Soccer Shop
Izzy's
Men's Warehouse
David's Bridal
Doria's
Proactive     SAMMI
Businesses with Student Connections
Good Guys Used Cars     SAMMI
A Smile Like Yours
Black Diamond Roofing
Taylor Reno's Soy Candles
Dr. DeJesus    
Dr. Lasley (Kaden's Dad)
Lou Nemeth Coffee
Delaney Hawley -- Photos     TRISTAN
Draevin Luke -- Photos      TRISTAN






Advertising / Fundraising for Future Publications

The Problem: 
ASB funds were approx. $400
CTE funds were approx. $600 
Publishing a newspaper costs 373.00
We have about $254 left
We need money if we want to print again.

The Solution: 
You :D ...we need to find advertisers (or create other fundraising opportunities)

Advertising:
Identify potential advertisers
Create / approve a rate sheet
Create a fundraising document / intro letter
Get some marketing training from our DECA stars
Introduce ourselves to the advertisers
???
PROFIT








Revision Activity for Legislative Article

Yesterday, we worked together on peer-editing the legislation article. You should have been provided with a peer review that did the following:
  1. In a couple of sentences, summarize what info. was well-developed and which ideas need additional support
  2. In a couple of sentences, identify places where the organization or LTQT format of the writing is weak, and provide suggestions
  3. Provide THREE questions or suggestions for extending and developing the discussion in the article
Today, you need to revise and supplement your coverage of the article. As you write, highlight your changes, and let me know which corrections are the result of feedback you got from the person who peer edited your paper. 

NOTE: You need to address at least one of the suggestions/ questions your partner provided in part three of the peer edit. One of the most important parts of news writing is to anticipate the questions, concerns, or implications raised by the news discussion and provide this coverage to the reader.

Peer Editing Activity for Legislative Article

Writing about these complex, developing issues can me more challenging than a typical article.  Today, we're going to do some peer-editing and have an opportunity to revise and develop the discussions in our articles.

Step One:  Read the article all the way through ONCE. You can jot some notes down on paper, but limit your time. After all, newspaper readers don't typically reread the news.  

Step Two: Once you are done, close out of the document (or shut the Chromebook) and answer the following to the best of your ability:

  • What basic information about the legislation do you remember?
  • The bill name or title?
  • What does the legislation do?
  • What problem does it attempt to solve
  • What kind of progress has recently been made?
  • How will the law be implemented? By whom?
  • Who supports the bill and why?
  • Who opposes the bill and why?
  • What is going to happen with the legislation in the near future?

Step Three: When you answered the questions, you probably didn't have all the information requested in part two. There are three possibilities for why this is the case:

  • The information just wasn't there
  • The information was there, but was not presented in a clear, organized way
  • You simply couldn't recall because of the brief reading you gave the bill

Good news writing addresses ALL of the three possible weaknesses. When we write articles we need to 

  1. Do the necessary research so we can present a complete understanding of the issues we cover
  2. Organize the information clearly to support reader understanding
  3. Draw attention to the main ideas we present with a summary lede and transition sentences that support reader understanding of content despite the quick reading news usually gets.

Step Four: Provide feedback / suggestions that might help the writer address the weaknesses of the article.  

  1. In a couple of sentences, summarize what info. was well-developed and which ideas need additional support
  2. In a couple of sentences, identify places where the organization or LTQT format of the writing is weak, and provide suggestions
  3. Provide THREE questions or suggestions for extending and developing the discussion in the article.


Monday, November 9, 2015

Features:
Bond Films: Best ever Bond, best ever movies, critique -- why ridiculous, and why we love them anyway. Bond tech -- what has showed up in real life, and what is too stupid to ever become real
The science of campaigning?
Black Friday vs Buy Nothing Day
Nutcracker Production and other Family tradtions
Women in Tech: Opportunities and discrimination

Book vs. Movie -- 
Getting Involved: NANOWRIMO -- National Novel Writing Month. How to start as a writer and getting involved in a community of writers 
Health: Food poisoning and food safety -- how to avoid making yourself and your friends sick
Pinterest is trying to be associated with a search engine, Facebook is getting a "Siri" named "M"
Banned books & why
Homelessness and volunteering


News
Keystone Pipeline
International cooperation -- Japan and Korea
Washington State Budget Draft
China One Child Policy
Trans-Pacific
New Mayor???
New speaker of the house (Paul Ryan)

Ben Carson candidacy who is he???

Sports
Getting Involved: Sports teams flexing muscle through student involvement -- unionizing and race relations -- Missou
Swim State
XC student feature -- first to podium
Winter Sports -- preview
Mariners


StudLyfe
Getting Involved: Encouraging student voting and involvement in politics
Getting Involved: Boys and Girls Club
Overcoming stress at midterms -- turning it around
All-State Band Competitors
Grease Musical

Foreign Exchange student 
College feature
Money Management